Elizabeth,
I like the idea you have here. A calisthenic exercise such as this can prove to be particularly beneficial in regards to your awareness of specifics and concrete object descriptions; this exercise also helps to stimulate your mind, get ideas jogging around, sweating. In this calisthenic exercise, I see how you not only took into consideration cataloging objects around you, but you arranged them in a way that is exemplary of a poem, or working draft. You have some nice lines already playing in your favor just from this warm-up type exercise, and I think you could definitely use them collectively or individually to your advantage.
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