Pauline,
This journal entry is, by far, the best example of what a calisthenic exercise should look like, and even more so what is has the ability to and should produce if given the time. With that said, I think that by taking an anothology jammed full of poems sets anyone, in this case you, who is in hopes of producing a promising piece off to a great start. What's even more intersting to me is how you not only used bits and pieces of various randomly collected lines throughout the anology, but also your own creative hand to structure a rather lengthy paragraph brimming with specificity and new ideas working in odd, fresh ways. The last exercise in your calisthenic entry is a great working draft; it is also (as I said at the beginning) a prime example of what a calisthenic exercise can potentially produce each and every time. I thnk the end draft you were able to create from this process is very promising, and holds a lot of weight for further expansion and possibilities. Wonderful job!
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